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FB 127 summary and oops ^^;

May 19th, 2006 (12:04 pm)
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current mood: chipper

Summary is now complete but I unthinkingly used my dial-up account when logging on and started DLing a >45MB file so...... it's going to be a couple of hours before I'll be able to UL it. ^^;;

A couple of minor changes in wording / phrasing but nothing major. Since this chapter was based on a different scan source, I can't make out most of the small asides so I don't know if that'll affect the overall chapter much. Hopefully not. One bit of wording that I'd waffled over a bit was Kureno's "There's something I have to do for Akito" (or something like that). The original J version is actually him saying "something he has to do *to* Akito", but... *shrug* For some reason I preferred going with "for" instead.

Hana-chan really is the most powerful(?) character in FB isn't she?? Being able to call Akki as she did... ^^;; However, I'm wondering a little as to who created that nickname for Akki and whether it mightn't have been Saki. It's almost like Kyoko -> Arisa -> Saki -> Akito in a chain of weird nicknaming. *laughs*

And, while I'm not 100% sure, if I'm not mistaken, Saki figured out Akki was female through denpa or keen observation? I don't believe Tohru told them Akki was female or that the person Kureno couldn't leave was female. This is one of the reasons why FB is so tricky with translations. English is a much more subject and active tense oriented language comparatively.

Anyhow, I think I'm going to hunt down some sustenance while the poor modem DLs that file. At a guess, I'll be able to UL the summary in a couple more hours.

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Posted by: masahironamiki8 (masahironamiki8)
Posted at: May 19th, 2006 07:58 pm (UTC)

wow!! big thank you for such a quick summary! i just finished taking a look at the scans- really cute stuff - kyo makes the most hilarious faces in this one. :) i hope we get to see hatori and mayu together soon and akito finally working it out with shigure (or closure at least). i'm so happy that everything is wrapping up well- its so nice that all these little pieces are falling into place. anyway, thanks so much again for your hard work- you really bring out the best in these chapters :)

Posted by: f_ireworks (f_ireworks)
Posted at: May 22nd, 2006 01:57 pm (UTC)
Waves_Hanajima

Hana-chan really is the most powerful(?) character in FB isn't she?? Being able to call Akki as she did... ^^;;
I know, I know! I think that was my favorite line in the whole chapter :-D

What do you think about Hana telling Akito "you need to have a little more confidence"? What do you think she was referring to, more confidence that Kureno has forgiven her, more confidence on herself, more confidence on herself as a woman?

Thanks so much for the wonderful summary :-)

Posted by: A K A R I (akari_kazuki)
Posted at: May 30th, 2006 06:47 pm (UTC)
Thanks! ^^

I always read your summaries! I'm truly grateful that you do them! The detail is great, and it helps me keep up with my fav. series so much better!

I'm new here on livejournal, and was wondering if I sould friend you? Please? Thanks again for your awesome summaries! Bye! ^^

~Akari Kazuki~

Posted by: Shadow (kagedreams)
Posted at: May 31st, 2006 03:52 pm (UTC)
Re: Thanks! ^^

You're welcome. ^_^ And feel free to friend me if you like.

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